Diggin the VIBES bro, I like where you're going with this song. That being said:
Imo, Your bass is overpowering the low end, try to bring it back and bring the kick forward to really accentuate the beat a bit. Lovin this sample.
The 808 is also not matching the pitch when it comes in @ 0:24. Some parts of it match then it goes off pitch. I think i can see what you were tryin to do with it though.
Aside from that good shit man, solid beat
Hey thanks man I really appreciate the criticism and I plan on improving!!!
Very chill. I like the chord structure, makes me think.
Id suggest changing up the kick a bit as it kind of gets repetitive in the beginning at least.
Liking the old school sample youre using, if my ears arent fooling me.
Another suggestion would be to add some reverb on the high notes coming in at 0:37, might add to the ambient feel.
Overall great job. Only thing i dont like is how short it is lol.
I like what youve done here!
Your kick is a little muddy and it detracts from the whole dance feel. Id suggest compressing it and making it louder, or raising the Mid/uppper mid EQ bands. Also, the hats feel a little fast and forced, especially when they are transitioning before 1:10, maybe take them out at that part? Just a thought.
Overall Great job man, enjoyed listening to this. Definitely did more than once :)
Thank you for the review! Now that you mention it I totally see what you mean with the percussion. Originally I thought the muddiness came from all the delay that was on the previous version's percussion, but I couldn't quite place my finger on where more of it was coming from afterwards.
Prettty good but...
the beginning has a nice calm feel, especially with the sound of rain. But the chorus on the guitars makes it sound de-tuned horribly, so the high guitars sound amazingly out of tune, and it completely kills the feel.
Id recommend adding a little more reverb and killing some of the detune and presence on the chorus.
Yeah, I must admit that the tune was a bit off (for some reason my guitar constantly got de-tuned even after tuning) :P But in my opinion the sound got a bit like Diablo II's Tristram theme, which I was a big fan of at the time.
Thank you for your review and good critics.
Pretty damn awsome
IF i must say so myself, was pretty damn badass, seems like itd be in an 80s detective movie, but theres only one other place i can think of
Yeah, a couple of other people have pointed that out.
I can just say it wasn't our intention ;)
Thanks for the review!
I like it. Although, it does sound like something that would be in a montage in a Disney movie :D
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